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Alignment is better
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Still not sure about this central grid layout for a few reasons:
1) The empty space on second and third row is really not good
2 the typography is ok and I get what you are trying to do but not sure it really works.
3) Once coded this is going to need some cautious consideration how it will work on mobile esp. if people use different word lengths etc -
The alignment of the footer widgets - how would that work? It looks like they have varied alignment to be in that position
It is an improvement on where you were but still way off approval I fear.
- The typography could be improved
- The whole design relies a lot on the other pages to make some of the more obscure ideas work
- It feels a little empty and basic still
- That central grid areas really needs fixing especially the positioning and negative space
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