Reviewers bad day makes author motivation fail?

I'm listening from macbook speakers but i have a feeling that piano arp is not in sync with strings and drums. Also arrangement is way too long and repetitive for me. Sometimes i feel there is something missing in some parts of the track. Generally speaking your track sounds like a nice unfinished sketch (draft). It has not a feeling of finished and polished track. It has nice melody but everything is a bit rough.
I hope it helps.

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