Twice rejected track. Why?

I think you're almost there, but the instruments are just a bit too DAW sounding and the mix is not coherent. It doesn't sound quite acoustic enough for an acoustic track. Try using more of the same reverb for all instruments and check your EQ on every track so nothing sticks out too much. For me, the bass pizzicato sounds like it's in another room. For a minimalistic track like this, it's hard to make every instrument carry weight and sound interesting. If you fail to make every single instrument sound great on it's own, a second option is to add more instruments (like backing strings or percussion) to mask any dead giveaways. And the violin would probably sound better played live

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